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To them,
The target on my back is no match
For the one between my legs;
An idol of self-indulgence.

To you,
More important is a shot at
Thoughts that hum between my eyes;
The X on my chest
That marks where my soul must be.
©2008-2009 ~007-LaHamletta
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No idea. Class exercise. It's total shit, and I doubt I'll fix it, like most of this stuff. -_-

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:icon007-bloodyalaizabel:
I love everything about this except: "That marks where my soul must be." - I feel like it should be something like "That marks where my soul should be" or something like that.

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Before you point fingers, make sure your hands are clean.

Love and be loved,
BloodyAlaizabel

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:icon007-lahamletta:
Yeah, that line's a little wonky.
:icon007-bloodyalaizabel:
Ha, I have never heard the word wonky before.

--
Before you point fingers, make sure your hands are clean.

Love and be loved,
BloodyAlaizabel

The Myspace
:icon007-lahamletta:
Really? I like to use it. >>
:icon007-bloodyalaizabel:
lol. How funny.

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Before you point fingers, make sure your hands are clean.

Love and be loved,
BloodyAlaizabel

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